Conversations with Ourselves

“Girls, sit down– we need to talk,” she said in a voice that was effortlessly gentle and firm. Without standing from her own seat at the circular table, she pulled out the two chairs on either side of her at once, her aging shoulders magnificently curved and cut with years’ long repetition of bearing weight.

The young women, each so accustomed in her own way to stiffening against  authority, felt no impulse to buck the older woman’s command. She was worn to softness, and her eyes shone divine-lit kindness, and her wisdom– long, hard acquired– was a salve each woman ached to apply.

Present chose the cushioned chair and pushed a little at the stack of books before her so that each spine was aligned in a sturdy column. Past chose the wooden chair by default, and she wiggled just visibly enough to silently voice her discomfort.

(continued)

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Today I’m excited to share with you my first piece of published fiction, which is a part of my extraordinary friend Preston Yancey’s series, Conversations with Ourselves. I believe that the best fiction tells truth, so you will see in this post a glimpse of who I was, who I am, and who I hope to be– and, perhaps, even a little of yourself.

Please join me at Preston’s blog!

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4 Responses to Conversations with Ourselves

  1. um… i LOVE it! i recently dipped into the fiction a little myself and know how absolutely soul-bare it can seem to try something new….on the interwebs. you did fantastic. you and your soul can sit pretty :)

  2. I cannot express how much I love this piece. My only regret? It didn’t last long enough. Give us more of Present and Past, with a little Future thrown in here and there.

    • Thanks, Marilyn– maybe if I ever have opportunity to expand it in a book, I will. But there was a lot of Future in there because I wanted to focus on the hope of what could be. :)

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